(31) about my paper 3

I made my dad check out my paper for grammatical errors and send me the revised version of it, so I think I should be almost done with it. I haven’t started the references page yet though so that will probably take a while to do. I just need a conclusion paragraph to summarize it all. Letting other people read my paper, edit it, and give me feedback, has definitely helped in the development process. I usually don’t let people other than my parents read my paper but I let my boyfriend read it earlier today and he gave constructive comments and pointed out the things he thought needed changing. His suggestions were really helpful, so I’m glad I let him read it. I was kind of worried about not having a real
“thesis statement” at the very start of the paper in the introductory paragraph, but I think my argument is pretty clear towards the middle of the paper. The paper is starting to make a lot of sense to me, (well….thank God) but I still think there are a number of things I can improve on and tweak. I really wish I was an amazing writer. I was never what you would call verbose, but I think I write better than I speak. Which is pretty sad considering that I don’t think I write too well. Guess I’m just an average student. I’m going to try and edit my paper a bit more before I submit it online tomorrow. Really hope it turns out okay!